okay
it seemed a little too loudly rendered...too much distotion..
and i would remove the click, or whatever that was.
while on beat, it makes some sounds, sound off beat...i think it would have a larger impact with out it.
okay
it seemed a little too loudly rendered...too much distotion..
and i would remove the click, or whatever that was.
while on beat, it makes some sounds, sound off beat...i think it would have a larger impact with out it.
yeeeeehaaaaawwwww!
loving this tune.
all your 5's are belong to me....
or you err you know what mean.
for great justice <3
holy distortion batman!
ok, next time render at a lower level...holy crap!
and it is just another tetris tune...not very unique...sorry.
do something unique, next time, and get a better rating form me.
check out my stuff (i got 3 tetrises for you, one normal, and 2 special.
GOOD GROOVE, more please?
originality: 8 (it is after all a cover...kinda, but not a normally covered song..points for that.)
diversity: 9 the beat and piano parts are all the is, but they are from 2 different worlds..so it is all good.
clarity: 8 smooth, but the click/pop at then end ruins the loop.
effort:7 (perfect integration of the sounds/beats.)
overall 7 ...it left me wanting more...perhaps a whole song, and nit just a nice loop.
and if possible, come check my stuff out, and review please.
well, maybe if it did something?
ok, the drum beats are good, but using the pilch trance 30sc (in its stock form, at least it sounds exactly like it) does not lend well, to to long continuous notes.
you need to break it up more, cause the heavy flange gets really annoying..
and maybe if it did something other than the exact same pattern over and over and over again.
good, but i have to agree hodihum was better
hodihum was better, this was not bad, but just not as good.
perhaps you should remake hodihum?
that is what i want.
How should I though. what should i mess with in it? I need an idea for a cooler remix
happy-core!
it is stuff like this that makes me want to make happy-core!
but you rendered it too loud...distortion baby, distortion!
and that kick?.. a little to...snappy.
when you are listening to it, try to keep the red out of the monitor bars, when you render it to a lower quality (like what we have a t newgrounds) the distortion becomes really evident.
keep it up man.
thnx. I will render it softer. I tend to make music at night and i dont want to wake people up so i usually turn up the sounds but then forget to mess with the volume before I export it. :) and yes the kick annoyed me too but since all i have is a demo program, i cant go back and change it :( ahh well. im glad you like my music :)
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