how could you screw up a midi that bad?
i have the exact midi that you used...
but you changed keys...on just the organ....making the whole thing into a dissident pile of poop..in the middle.
check that and resubmit.
also, you might want to let the guitar ring some more...it would sound batter...you know go change the lengths of the cut off notes...
go check out GS screamer's "bowser the shredder", of how this should be done.
nice try, though