it is very incoherent due it just being echoes
the huge echoes, and extreme speed speed of many phrases, makes this song into an incoherent mess.
it just sounds like you took every Zelda midi you could find, and pasted them into one track, one instrument, and used the pipe organ from fruity loops, with no regards as to if it could even be understood.
i love this song
this is full of energy and i love the sounds..
thank you! :D glad you liked it!
nice
the piano work is smooth, once it comes in the feeling is really nice and full.
now the only bad points i can find (cause well, heck you said you want to finish it):
the piano is a little too much in the left ear...bring it like 10-15 degrees right and you should be good.
the strings..are...well, the notes, and chords and such are good, but the sample, or sound is just not making feel it...to muffled sounding.
all in all great work.
Thx for the review and the advice....I'll see what I can do. The only thing that's now pissing me off about this song is that someone down voted this song which made it go from a 5 to a 2 and didnt say why. but yeah thx though! ^_^v
btw stu, anything under this doesnt apply to you.
So whoever is reading this and down votes this song...I wanna know a reason why you did it and what made you hate this song... otherwise...FUCK OFF!!! thank you.
the chorus sound replacing the vocals ruined it
the vocals need that singlular, clarity...the pop on the beginning of most notes...that is what gave the song feeling...
by using the chorus sound (which fades quickly in on each and every note) you have lost that.
there are spots where it sounded good, but most of the sing was left hanging...
the rest was well done though.
sounds kinda...weak..or thin
it does sound way too midi-like.
there is no energy..no feeling.
i would say you seemed to worry to much about flangers..and delays, and not enough about geting the changes of energy...
this sing should go from smooth, to energetic...this stays thin...
if you want you can come check my crawling (i like it, and it may give you some ideas)
i've become so numb......
ok, not bad, except it is way to reminiscient of numb, by linkin park, plus man it is only those 2 patterns, no breakdown no nothing. shoulda just made a loop, cause that is all it is.
not that i actually ever heard the original....
but i am liking the sound of this.
it is keeping with the feel of the old school meganman sounds, but the beat seems way better..
but that also, could be due to the original...
none the less, good groove.
sleepy sleepy
man, this is calming for me...
YES I WILL
and it is not even really that fast...just short.
but it just stops....
it is not a loop. it stops mid song, midriff, midmeasure, midnote...
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